Friday, May 2, 2008

Priyaa.neevu kaaka verevvaru??

Naa kalalu, naa kavitalu..
Naa kathalu, naa kalpanalu..
Naa talapulu, naa tapanalalo..sthaanam..
Priyaa..neeku kaaka verevvariki??

Naa abhimaanam, naa aaradhana..
Naa anuraagam, naa aalapana..
Naa aasa, naa alochana..
Priya..neevi kaaka verevvarivi??

Naa kopanni.. naa allarinee..
Naa alasatani..naa aanandanni..
Naa vedanani.. Virahanni.. panchukunedi..
Priyaa neevu kaaka inkevvaru??
Posted by Keerthy at 5:08 AM

5 comments:

  1. BHARATNovember 2, 2008 at 9:07 AM

    hey 2nd stanza lo,,,na alochana ,taravata edaina oka word pedatava/

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  2. BHARATNovember 2, 2008 at 9:17 AM

    nd , would b better if u add one more stanza.

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  3. keerthyNovember 3, 2008 at 3:51 AM

    Ya, bharat.. add cheyyali, tappadu ante.. Naa alochanalaki raaju vi neevu kaaka verevvaru anesukundaam..

    Actualga naa meaning entante, all those thoughts of mine are yours totally ani..

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  4. BHARATNovember 4, 2008 at 1:48 AM

    k sounds good

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  5. GuruOctober 21, 2010 at 4:03 AM

    Naa kalalu, naa kavitalu..
    Naa kathalu, naa kalpanalu..
    Naa talapulu, naa tapanalalo..sthaanam..
    Priyaa..neeku kaaka verevvariki??


    Hello Keerthy gaaru,

    3 paras lo first one is gud...!! esplly 3 line....!!

    keep writing..!

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